Not yet. The draft runs to 812 words and the limit for explainers is 650 words M-04, so 162 words have to come out before it goes to Lina. The figures and the park table hold up, so nothing else in the brief is at risk.

Start with the method section. It walks through transect counting in field terms, and the readers are council park officers and volunteers M-07. They need the count and what it means for their park, so two sentences on how it was done will carry it.